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19 October 2008 @ 06:41 pm
Chapter 1 and 2  
Story Title: Back To The Future – A Story About Love, Sex and Time Travel
Chapter Title: The Phone Call
Pairing: Doc/Marty
Rating: PG
Words: 530 words
Beta: “nitocris1”

For a few weeks, I had a idea. A idea to retype Back To The Future part 1. And now here is chapter one and two. In this chapter, Marty entered Doc´s garage and on the end the telephone rang.

Chapter 1

A room was filled with clocks. There were maybe 250 or 300 of them. They were all set to 8:00 A.M. Old newspapers were lying everywhere and the whole room was filled with garbage. Photos of Thomas Edison and Ben Franklin were hanging on the wall. Doc Brown´s house looked really disheveled, as same as his lab and garage.

A teenage boy wearing blue jeans and Nike shoes opened the door and entered the room. He lifted the doormat and hid the house key under it. He closed the door.

“Hello, is anybody home? Einstein, where are you? Something isn´t okay here. Oh Jesus, it looks disgusting.”

He looked at the dirty dishes nearly choking at that sight, but he looked away and went to the big amp that stood in the corner of the room.

The boy placed a key in the machine and turned it. His fingers adjusted all switches and needles turning them all to maximum. His hand put a metal jack into the amp, then the other jack into the base of the guitar.

Marty McFly stood in front of the amp, striking a chord in his guitar when the speaker exploded blowing into the air and across the room. Marty smashed into a bookcase the whole content of which dumped onto him.

Marty took his sunglasses off. “Whoa…” he said. “Rock and Roll.”

Suddenly, the phone rang. The teen quickly stood up, searching for the source of that sound until he found the phone.

“Hello”- he said.

“Marty, is that you?”- the voice on the other end of the line asked.

The teen was really happy to hear this voice. “Hey, hey, Doc, where are you?”

“Thank God I found you. Listen to me - could you meet me at Twin Pines Mall tonight at 1:15? I've made a major breakthrough, I'll need your assistance.”

“Wait a minute… you mean 1:15 in the morning?”

“Yes, Marty.”

“What's going on? Where have you been the whole week?” Marty asked him in a sad voice.

“I was working. Marty, is it okay?”

“Yeah. I miss you.”

“I miss you too, but you are going to see me in… seventeen hours again. Don´t be sad, those few hours will go by and you will be able to see me again every day and night, if you want.”

Marty smiled. “Yes, you´re right. But where´s Einstein, is he with you?”
“Yeah, he's here with me.”

“You know, Doc, you left your equipment for the whole week.”

”Ah, my equipment… that reminds me of… Marty, don’t hook up the amplifier. There's a slight possibility it’s going to overload then.”

Marty sighed. “Yeah, I'll keep that in mind.”

“Good, I'll see you tonight. Don't forget - 1:15 a.m., Twin Pines Mall.”


Suddenly, all clocks together went off.

“Are those my clocks?”

“Yeah“, Marty answered. „It's 8:00.“

“They're late. My experiment has worked. They're all exactly twenty-five minutes slow!” Doc yelled happily.

“Wait a minute… wait a minute, Doc. Are you trying to tell me that it's 8:25?” Marty asked in disbelief.


“Damn! Doc, I'm late for school!”

He hung up the phone and quickly run out of Doc´s garage.


Title: The Fourth Banishment
Pairing: Doc/Marty
Rating: PG
Words: 421 words
Beta: “nitocris1”

Now to chapter two:

Chapter 2

Marty McFly was car-surfing to the Hill Valley High School. He realized exquisitely well that he was going to be too late. And he knew it’s his fourth time. At home George and Lorraine would be pretty pissed off at him and give him house arrest for the rest of day. He left the first 30 minutes of his history lesson but it didn’t matter.

When Marty reached the school, he jumped off the skateboard and took it in his hand, holding it under his arm. He ran upstairs and opened the school door. He hoped that Mr. Strickland wouldn’t meet him in the corridor, but he was wrong. Marty wanted to open the door to the classroom when suddenly he felt someone pulling at his jacket. The boy turned around and saw who it was. It was Mr. Strickland.

“McFly”, the man said, his voice gruffy and raw ,”you´re 35 minutes too late. I´m sorry, but I am forced to give you your fourth school-banishment. I think one day you will end up expelled from school. Tell me: why are you late?”

Marty hesitated for a moment. His face got an anguished look. “It wasn´t my fault. Doc set all of his clocks twenty-five minutes slow.”

Strickland got angry. “Doc? Am I to understand you're still hanging around with Doctor Emmett Brown, McFly? You know that Doctor Brown is dangerous, he is a crazy old man. Obviously, you like old men. What are you doing with this crazy man, Doctor Brown? Tell me this, McFly. I think you two are more than friends.”

Marty shook his head. “What are you talking about?”

Mr. Strickland got closer to him and grabbed his arm. “You don’t like it when somebody is decrying your friend. But it´s the truth: you two are spending too much time together.”

“Can I go now, Mr. Strickland?”

“I noticed your band is on the roster for dance auditions after school today. But why should you even bother McFly, you haven't got a chance, you're too much like your old man. No McFly in the whole history of Hill Valley ever did anything important for the town.

“Yeah, well history is gonna change.”

“We’ll see and now go to the clasroom.”

Marty nodded. He opened the door and entered the classroom. He went to his chair standing on the other end of the class near the wall. The teen put his hands on the table, laying his head down on his arms. 20 minutes later, he fell asleep.

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